Row, Row, Row Your Boat

A new spin on something old. A success?

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Row, Row, Row Your Boat

The water nuzzles
the boat,
a gentle kiss.

The oars slip
into a darkness
as black as oil.

On the shore,
dreams dance:
goblins and gnomes

tossing acorns
at butterflies.


8 thoughts on “Row, Row, Row Your Boat

  1. Love your words as usual, but I’m so used to your thoughts flowing through the entire piece that I found myself wondering where the connection between the boat and shore was in this one. Hm… Thinking, thinking…

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