Revisions and Puppies

A few moments ago, I reviewed my last post, made a few revisions, a few small edits. Said activity lent me an idea…and I ran with it, so to speak.



I’ve decided to spare all the typos
I made yesterday, the transposed letters,
the misplaced commas, the e’s before i’s
I carved after c’s, let them frolic
on the white paper like puppies,

mongrels, through fields
of deep snow, watch them bound across
pages of privilege, joyfully tainting
each sentence they touch,
their floppy ears flopping like wings.



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